A reclusive fantasy writer conquers her reading list.

Review: The Companions of Jehu by Alexandre Dumas

Napoleon by Antoine-Jean Gros
Portrait of Napoleon by Antoine-Jean Gros.

In The Companions of Jehu, even though Alexandre Dumas implies the fate of some of the characters from the beginning, throughout the book I couldn’t help wishing—no, believing— that it could turn out differently.

I have to admit, The Companions of Jehu, got off to a very, very slow start. I’m pretty sure I’ve never read a book that was so slow to begin. There was an introduction, in which Dumas shares at length, in narrative form, how he developed the idea for the novel and how he conducted his research. It was kind of funny and not boring, but there was more. Before the actual story starts, which begins in 1799, there is a ten or so page prologue tracing the history-in-brief of the city of Avignon, from the late 12th century. (I’m not kidding.) While a lot of it was pretty interesting, I understood more deeply than ever why writers are cautioned against prologues, and against beginning the story too early.

On the other hand, this history adds depth to a tale that might have seemed isolated and superficial without it. It puts the story into context. Also, it seems from the text that one of Dumas’s primary goals in the writing of his novels was to educate the French public about their history. (He must have had a more patient public than most readers today.) I know he educated me; I couldn’t help but return to Wikipedia and the dictionary again and again to learn about personages throughout the history of France and political terms of the day. Even though it was difficult to get through that initial chunk of background, I’m glad I read it. There were more history lessons sprinkled liberally throughout the text, which I found illuminating (if sometimes a pesky interruption). I’m pretty sure this is not the best way to include exposition, and it’s definitely not how it’s done now, but it did the job. Dumas’s somewhat peculiar self-aware style of narration made it easier to swallow.

Once the history was covered, it was easy to get into the story itself. Dumas has a way with dialogue and fast-paced action, which I guess maybe goes without saying. Two mysterious strangers appear at a wayside inn, and sit down at a table d’hote (basically family-style dining with other guests) and overhear the tale of some highwaymen who, in Robin Hood-like fashion, rob from the government and give to the cause of the exiled King Louis XVIII. The two strangers are surprised and appalled when one of the masked brigands enters the dining room, returns some personal funds—accidentally mixed in with stolen government money—to their owner, and leaves with no one challenging him. One of the strangers, Roland, a fiery young soldier with a death-wish, who also happens to be aide-de-camp to Napoleon Bonaparte, makes it his mission to track down these Companions of Jehu and put an end to their treason.

Les Compagnons de Jehu by Alexandre Dumas Dumas is sympathetic towards and critical of both the Republican and Royalist camps. He seems most sympathetic to Napoleon’s cause, but in spite of that, I felt more sympathy for the Royalists; I especially loved the rugged Chouans of Brittany and their leader, Georges Cadoudal. I also found myself more on the side of the character of Morgan, the most important “Companion of Jehu” in the story, than that of Roland, even though I liked both characters; maybe I’m just a sucker for a lost cause, but I found the royalist ideals more heartfelt than Roland’s almost unthinking devotion to his friend, Napoleon. Roland’s chivalry eventually won me over, though.

This action-packed political adventure has a bit of darkness to it, since the events take place just after the Terror. Reading this story, set in context by Dumas, it’s easy to see why people were drawn to a figure like Napoleon, and why the people of France longed for the order and stability he must have represented after the upheaval of revolution.

(Oh, and I found a new kind of dandy to love.)

This review is part of Paris in the Spring: Alexander Dumas on Tour at the Classics Circuit.

Making Every Project Work

Nathan Bransford asked recently, When do you know if a project is going to work or not? It’s an interesting question, and so are the replies.

There’s no particular point at which I know if something will “work” or “not work”; it’s just a general feeling I get as I spend time on the project. There’s no question of throwing the piece out or stopping completely on it; I have a tool I use to figure out what isn’t working, and to fix it so it works again. I use brainstorming to track what fuels my passions, and I also track what I dislike or what bores me. The mind-maps I make are independent from any given work-in-progress (If you’re familiar with Holly Lisle’s How to Think Sideways ecourse, I basically use the “Sweet Spot Map”.) This way, when I’ve been working on something for a little while—or better yet, when I’m first planning my idea—I can see quickly why my interest is fizzling out.

It works like this: Is my Major League Baseball pitcher hero making me yawn? Maybe that’s because “sports” is on my Boring List. So I turn him into something I know I’m excited about. A 17th century poet is better. Yes, everything will have to change around him (unless I want to write a time-travel story, which I don’t.) I can adjust my idea to fit. The point is, rather than having to start over from scratch with a new idea, I’ve tweaked my idea so that it’s the right idea for me. It may not be anything like the original story, but the point is that I still have an idea.

This is useful at any stage of the process, and sometimes it’s possible to tweak things just enough that I don’t have to start over from scratch. The only time this method gives me trouble is when I’m writing about a topic that I like to read but don’t necessarily enjoy writing about. Those can be harder to peg.

On the Cover: Return by Peter S. Beagle

“On the Cover” is my weekly occasion to post an eye-catching cover. The covers I post may be from books I own, something I’ve recently wishlisted, or just a cool cover I really think everybody should see. Sometimes I may have something to say about the artwork itself, but I’m not an art major or anything so please keep that in mind; I’m just trying my best to get the idea across.

Return by Peter S. Beagle

Return by Peter S. Beagle.

“Every adventure has a beginning and every truly great adventure has an ending.

In 1993 Peter S. Beagle, author of the beloved classic, The Last Unicorn, took an old song lyric of his and spun it into the Locus Award-winning fantasy The Innkeeper’s Song, an enchanting tale of three powerful women, each with a secret past, a stable boy, and an innkeeper who set in motion a series of events that bring them face to face with the forces of magic and the workings of fate.

Four years later Beagle took us back to their world in the World Fantasy Award nominated story collection, Giant Bones, and in the novella ‘Lal and Soukyan’ continued the adventures of two of his most-loved characters. In the decade that followed, Beagle touched on their world in powerful stories like ‘Quarry,’ ‘Chandail,’ ‘Barrens Dance,’ and ‘What Tune the Enchantress Plays.’

Now, after a hiatus of six years, he comes back to the story of Soukyan (once known as Nyateneri) in Return. Return is a major new fantasy novella in which Soukyan turns to face the evil he has fled for most of his adult life, finally confronting the powerful forces that both made him and that have tried so tirelessly to destroy him. The end of the adventure is nearly here….”

The Bards of Bone Plain up for pre-order!

Well, well. What have we here? According to Amazon, Patricia A. McKillip’s next book, The Bards of Bone Plain, will be out on December 7th of next this year! As if McKillip’s writing alone isn’t reason enough for me to buy it, the word “bards” in the title seals the deal. There is nothing I love more than bards. Unless it’s elvish bards.

I hope Kinuko Y. Craft will be creating the cover art for this one. It’s always an exciting part of the wait for any new McKillip novel.

As Kingfishers Catch Fire

(I recommend reading this one aloud to yourself; In fact, I recommend reading all poetry aloud to yourself, to hear the “music”.)

As kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame;
As tumbled over rim in roundy wells
Stones ring; like each tucked string tells, each hung bell’s
Bow swung finds tongue to fling out broad its name;
Each mortal thing does one thing and the same:
Deals out that being indoors each one dwells;
Selves — goes itself; myself it speaks and spells,
Crying, What I do is me: for that I came.

I say more: the just man justices;
Keeps grace: that keeps all his goings graces;
Acts in God’s eye what in God’s eye he is —
Christ. For Christ plays in ten thousand places,
Lovely in limbs, and lovely in eyes not his
To the Father through the features of men’s faces.

- Gerard Manley Hopkins

Kingfisher

According to Wikipedia:

“Gerard Manley Hopkins, S.J. (28 July 1844 – 8 June 1889) was an English poet, Roman Catholic convert, and Jesuit priest, whose posthumous 20th-century fame established him among the leading Victorian poets. His experimental explorations in prosody (especially sprung rhythm) and his use of imagery established him as a daring innovator in a period of largely traditional verse.”

Weekly Geeks
This post is a response to Weekly Geeks 13-2010.

Monday Reflections | 04-19-2010

New in the stacks:
King Arthur and His Knights of the Round Table by Roger Lancelyn GreenKing Arthur and His Knights of the Round Table (Puffin Classics) by Roger Lancelyn Green.

“King Arthur is one of the greatest legends of all time. From the magical moment when Arthur releases the sword in the stone to the quest for the Holy Grail and the final tragedy of the Last Battle, Roger Lancelyn Green brings the enchanting world of King Arthur stunningly to life. One of the greatest legends of all time, with an inspiring introduction by David Almond, award-winning author of “Clay”, “Skellig”, “Kit’s Wilderness”, and “The Fire-Eaters”.

Roger Lancelyn Green was a lesser-known member of the Inklings, and I’m looking forward to getting an introductory overview of the King Arthur tales with this children’s classic.

Enchanted Glass by Diana Wynne JonesEnchanted Glass by Diana Wynne Jones.

“Aidan Cain has had the worst week of his life. His gran died, he was sent to a foster home, and now malicious beings are stalking him. There is one person Gran told Aidan to go to if he ever got into trouble—a powerful sorcerer who lives at Melstone House.

But when Aidan arrives on the doorstep, he finds that the sorcerer’s grandson, Andrew, has inherited the house. The good news is that Aidan can tell immediately that Andrew’s brimming with magic, too—and so is everyone else at Melstone. The bad news is that Andrew doesn’t remember anything his grandfather taught him. Chaos is swiftly rising, and he has no idea how to control it. A sinister neighbor is stealing power from the land, magic is leaking between realms . . . and it’s only a matter of time before the Stalkers find Aidan.

If Aidan and Andrew can harness their own magics, they may be able to help each other. But can they do it before the entire countryside comes apart at the seams?”

The Sword by Bryan M. LitfinThe Sword (Chiveis Trilogy) by Bryan M. Litfin.

“This novel of page-turning action and adventure poses the question, ‘If a society had no knowledge of Christianity, and then a Bible were discovered, what would happen?’

Four hundred years after a deadly virus and nuclear war destroyed the modern world, a new and noble civilization emerges. In this kingdom, called Chiveis, snowcapped mountains provide protection, and fields and livestock provide food. The people live medieval-style lives, with almost no knowledge of the ‘ancient’ world. Safe in their natural stronghold, the Chiveisi have everything they need, even their own religion. Christianity has been forgotten—until a young army scout comes across a strange book.

With that discovery, this work of speculative fiction takes readers on a journey that encompasses adventure, romance, and the revelation of the one true God. Through compelling narrative and powerful character development, The Sword speaks to God’s goodness, his refusal to tolerate sin, man’s need to bow before him, and the eternality and power of his Word. Fantasy and adventure readers will be hooked by this first book in a forthcoming trilogy.”

This is an ARC sent to me by Crossway Books for review.

What I’m Watching:

Spock smooching and swinging from trees and stuff! Awesome!

What I’m Writing:
I’m participating in a marathon at Forward Motion, trying to get where I want to be on Foxglove. Forward Motion can be as low key (or not) as you want it to be, so I joined in an effort to connect with other writers at a level of time investment that I can manage right now (which is, granted, not much.)

What I’m Revising:
Getting ready to brush off Dogwood, after some encouragement from a fellow How to Revise Your Novel student.

Around the House:
At this point, the main goal is just to get to bed at a decent hour, get enough sleep, and get writing earlier in the morning. I find I do better when my mind is just a little fuzzy, and it’s encouraging to get a bunch of words written early in the day. Actually, everything else seems to be sort of falling into place around that, which works for me.

Spirituality:
I just have this feeling of an Imminent Something Wonderful. Maybe it’s just Spring, but I don’t think so. . . . I can’t say more at present. We’ll see what happens.

Review: Auralia’s Colors by Jeffrey Overstreet

Auralia's Colors by Jeffrey OverstreetTitle: Auralia’s Colors
Author: Jeffrey Overstreet
Genre: Fantasy

Sometimes the Fantasy genre (or any genre, I suppose) gets so caught up in trends that one can almost lose hope. Right now a certain sparse writing style seems to have preempted the delectable prose of writers like McKillip, Kushner and similar, let alone Tolkien. A lot of series are never-ending serials, often involving a magical detective, with writing that’s the equivalent of a one-two punch. Written in first person perspective with sarcastic voices, these books don’t usually have a lot of substance and just generally get on my nerves.

When I opened Auralia’s Colors and saw that author Jeffrey Overstreet thanked J.R.R. Tolkien and Patricia A. McKillip (among other great writers) in his acknowledgements, I felt a tentative hopefulness.

Auralia is an orphan discovered by one of the Gatherers, a criminal class exiled from the fortress of House Abascar because of their misdeeds. Krawg finds the infant on the riverbank, sleeping in the footprint of a mysterious creature, and sneaks her into the Gatherer camp where she will be raised alongside the other Gatherer orphans until she is old enough to attend the Rites of Privilege. There, she will be tried to see if she is worthy to enter House Abascar. As she grows, however, Auralia has no desire to leave her forest, where she seeks out all its colors, crafting gifts from them for her friends—certainly not to live in House Abascar, where colors are surrendered to the palace and the people live a drab existence under a proclaimation called the Wintering of Abascar. When Auralia finally accepts her calling to show Abascar the colors she’s discovered, a chain reaction begins that will change the lives of the people of Abascar—and their prince, Cal-raven—forever.

This book has just about everything a really good fantasy should have: Beautiful writing that evokes a sensory and emotional experience; a deceptively simple yet riveting story; a well-rounded cast of characters who are at once human and archetypal; and layers of meaning so one can go back to the story again and still find new questions to ask. Truly excellent fantasy asks the deeper questions about the things that matter, without obviously asking any questions at all, and touches the unseen. Not mere stories, the best fantasy is threaded through with the numinous. At the same time, there’s a warmth about this book, a lack of pretension, that makes it approachable.

I can’t think of another book I’ve read with heroic characters who are truly good, yet without any unmitigated villain. Every character has something redeemable at their core, but you’re never confused about right and wrong. Auralia is the archetypal “free spirit”, handled much better here than in other books I’ve read. Auralia isn’t just a feather-headed dreamer; something about her is purposeful and even valiant. The ale boy seems to be pushed into events by happenstance, and yet it becomes apparent that something unseen moves him into place time and time again. Prince Cal-raven is admirable and yet has a certain humility which makes me admire him all the more. And then there is The Keeper, a shadowy presence that makes itself known in dreams . . .

Ultimately, Auralia’s Colors is a book about the relationship between faith and creativity. What are we here for, and how do we use our gifts? How does our artistic vision connect to and reflect the bigger picture? What do artists owe others, if anything? How do we respond when others reject the light that we’re revealing?

I don’t give stars or hearts or anything here at Badgerish.Net, but with this book I’m going to start awarding “Desert Island Keeper” status to books that I think are exceptional (and would want to have with me if I was stranded on a desert island). That way, people can find my top picks by clicking the tag. (Read more about Desert Island Keepers.)

Purchase Auralia’s Colors at Amazon.

On the Cover: Enchanted Glass by Diana Wynne Jones

(It looks like the Cover Attractions meme is no longer happening, but that’s okay. I’ve been posting covers—oddly enough, on Wednesdays—since way back on an old blog of mine, so I’m going to keep up the habit.)

“On the Cover” is my weekly occasion to post an eye-catching cover. The covers I post may be from books I own, something I’ve recently wishlisted, or just a cool cover I really think everybody should see. Sometimes I may have something to say about the artwork itself, but I’m not an art major or anything so please keep that in mind; I’m just trying my best to get the idea across.

This time, I’m featuring two covers for the same book. I just couldn’t choose. I saw the UK cover first, and fell in love with the candy colors and the topsy-turvy through-the-looking-glass typeface:

Enchanted Glass by Diana Wynne Jones, UK version

I went searching for the book on Amazon, and found the US edition, which was so charming. It’s active and whimsical, and is more clearly Middle Grade fiction. The colors streaming through the glass onto the clever-looking little hero captivated my imagination and made me want to read the book, even though I don’t normally read in this age group.

Enchanted Glass by Diana Wynne Jones

Enchanted Glass by Diana Wynne Jones.

“Aidan Cain has had the worst week of his life. His gran died, he was sent to a foster home, and now malicious beings are stalking him. There is one person Gran told Aidan to go to if he ever got into trouble—a powerful sorcerer who lives at Melstone House.

But when Aidan arrives on the doorstep, he finds that the sorcerer’s grandson, Andrew, has inherited the house. The good news is that Aidan can tell immediately that Andrew’s brimming with magic, too—and so is everyone else at Melstone. The bad news is that Andrew doesn’t remember anything his grandfather taught him. Chaos is swiftly rising, and he has no idea how to control it. A sinister neighbor is stealing power from the land, magic is leaking between realms . . . and it’s only a matter of time before the Stalkers find Aidan.

If Aidan and Andrew can harness their own magics, they may be able to help each other. But can they do it before the entire countryside comes apart at the seams?”

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